very emotional...
Mere tu Ankooh mai ansoo agayee...
Hameshaa kii tarhh superb likha haii
aglayy hissayy ka intazarr rahhay gaaa
تیری انگلیاں میرے جسم میںیونÛÛŒ لمس بن Ú©Û’ Ú¯Ú‘ÛŒ رÛیں
ک٠کوزه گر میری مان لےمجھے چاک سے Ù†Û Ø§ØªØ§Ø±Ù†Ø§
bohat achi kahani likhi hai
bohat interesting lag rahi hai
keep writing next part ka intezar rahay ga
wah hamesha ki trah xabardast
heart touching
nxt part ka intezaar rehe ga
bhot acha likha ha
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very very beautyfully written
next part bhii umeed hai jld aye ga
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some people are worth
melting for....!!!
..(olaf)..
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very well written
lekin kuch jani pehchani hai story
wah bht umdah
Zindagi tu apnay he qadmun pe chalti hay Faraz
Auron k Sahary tu Janazy utha kartay hain